
“Flat 1, Aashiyana Park, Near The Great Rose Hotel, Lane-16, Ajanta Nagar, Pune -12. You surely have to come, my friend. And do bring Pooja bhabhi along if you’d like. My wife would be pleased to meet her.”, Hanif said with his usual 100-watt smile pasted across his face, a smile so completely genuine that it made the person he was talking to forget that he was a rough looking, hefty man in his late 40’s. Even his cratered face, probably a result of some infection in childhood, didn’t manage to dilute the impact of his smile.
Rajan smiled at the man in front of him, an addition to his small yet colorful friend circle. It had only been a couple of days that he’d met Hanif and given his usually reticent ways with people, Rajan was amazed at having taken the decision to call this man a ‘friend’ so soon.
He considered the invitation for a thoughtful moment in some subconscious corner of his mind before responding back with a thin smile. He hadn’t failed to notice the touch of pride in Hanif’s voice when he spoke of his address. Although Rajan was fairly new to the city, he knew that Ajanta Nagar was an upmarket area in town and was quite surprised to know that Hanif, a man of limited means, owned a house in such a posh locality.
“Sure, Hanif! I will make it this time!”
Rajan was a trifle embarrassed of the fact that he had committed to visit Hanif’s house two times in three days now and on both occasions, his demanding boss and his extra-demanding wife had managed to keep him at bay from Hanif’s house!
“Pooja, Hanif has invited us to his house again. Do you want to come along? And this time, I am going to keep my word, no matter what happens!”
The voice on the other end of the line went dead for a few seconds. Rajan knew his wife didn’t really like the man and didn’t want to come along.
“Ok.”
The line went dead again. This time she’d kept the phone.
“Well, at least she said ‘Ok’!”, Rajan thought to himself before texting his wife that he’d pick her up in 15 mins.
As he kick-started his bike causing its wheels to skid around in the muddy ground, Rajan realized that he was in fact, quite curious to visit Ajanta Nagar and more particularly, Aashiyana Park. He decided that he had quite liked the name since the moment Hanif had mentioned it.
“Bhai saab, ye Ajanta Nagar mein Lane-16 kahan padta hai??
Rajan heard his pretty wife ask the span-spewing Rickshaw-wallah who stood wearing a shabby khakhi uniform near his antique three-wheeler. Over his last 4 months in the city, Rajan had decided that it was best to let Pooja ask for directions to these guys. They always seemed to have the correct answer for women, especially of the presentable kind.
He waited restlessly as he came back from his world of thoughts.
“Why the hell does this guy have a smirk on his face?”, Rajan wondered to himself as he gave the man a dirty look.
They’d driven past an open stream of water and crossed 2 over-bridges to get to this little chowk with a Rickshaw stand that Hanif had given as a landmark.
As Rajan turned right into a corner, as per the man’s directions, he exclaimed to his irritable wife,
“Hey there it is. I see that huge board up there.”
Rajan heard his wife grumble in acknowledgement.
They were welcomed by a bustling shopping area as soon as they entered Ajanta Nagar, and Rajan wondered why his wife wasn’t asking him to stop today at one of these shops to gift herself something.
“Must be the bad mood”, Rajan surmised.
A couple of hundred meters ahead, they could see the lanes begin, neatly offset to the main road, each lane accommodating about a dozen individual row-houses.
“Lane-12….. 13… Lane-14…”, Rajan heard his wife count to shoo away her boredom.
“What’s her problem?”, Rajan was beginning to lose his temper now.
Just as he was about to give his wife a piece of his mind, he saw the elegantly done structure of The Great Rose Hotel rise into the sky before him.
“So far, so good. Just like Hanif had described.”, Rajan thought.
They had to ask around a couple of times more before they arrived at Lane-16 and a further three times before the found the correct ‘Aashiyana Park’. Apparently, there was one more in an adjacent lane that was causing all the confusion.
As he approached the beautifully constructed house, Rajan watched his wife let out an audible remark.
“Hmm…. Aashiyaana Park, here we are”.
“Eid ka chaand bhi aapse zyada theek time rakhta hai”, the bubbly and stockily built woman seated beside him was telling Rajan.
Hanif’s wife Rukhsar, was as smiley-faced as him, only she seemed to possess an intelligence about her that Hanif sometimes didn’t seem to have.
Through corner of his eye, Rajan saw his wife shift uncomfortably in her seat and make a face as she dug reluctantly with a spoon into her plate of sooji-ka-meetha, as Hanif’s wife put it.
“C’mon now, these things taste different in every household.”, he tried instilling some sense in his wife in sign language.
Meanwhile, his ears heard Hanif translate the sentences that his wife had just spoken, for him and Pooja, obviously embarrassed by the fact that his wife hardly knew any English.
“She’s saying that sometimes, the moon makes an appearance a day earlier in our neighbouring countries and our relatives often call us up and tell us that they’ve broken their month long fast during the month of Roza. We tell them that we’re still awake with our eyes glued to the skies.”
“Kabhi kabhi to Mumbai mein meri Ammi phone karke bolti hai, Id mubakarak beta. Hum bolte hai ki ruk jao ammi, ab tak chaand nahi dikha”.
Rukhsar wasn’t waiting for Hanif to even complete his translated sentences, obviously unable to control her friendly and chatty mannerisms.
As he heard his wife uninterestedly make conversation with Rukhsar, Rajan took some time to admire the beautifully done and elaborately decorated fish tank that stood as base for the T.V in the drawing room.
“That’s a nice tank, Hanif’, Rajan didn’t hold back the appreciation.
“Abhi to ye laaye pichle jumme pe”, Rukhsar volunteered even as Hanif hushed her up.
For the first time, Rajan saw his wife genuinely smile.
“So, aapke kitne bacche hai?”, Rajan was almost surprised now to hear his wife make decent conversation.
As Rukhsar went on and on with a touch of pride about how her elder son is studying to be an electronics engineer and his younger sister is aspiring to be an advertising professional and evidently continued on a bit too much about their good and bad qualities , Hanif showed Rajan around rest of the house.
“ Neat”, Rajan thought as he toured the intricately done up pad.
“Id pe zaroor aana. Aur sheer-korma khaake hi jaana”.
Both Rajan and Pooja waved their hands in return as they mounted the bike and heard their hosts say in unison as they bid them goodbyes with their pleasant smiles.
“Nice people.” , Rajan was rather glad to hear Pooja remark as they drove back to their rented apartment in the suburbs.
As he drove away from the half-painted, unnamed structure that Hanif called his ‘Aashiyaana Park’ , past the dingy and littered lanes, past the shabby make-shift one-roomed concrete hutments that lined galli no.16 , past little children with running noses and unkempt dresses that played in the dirty puddles, past the dilapidated chai stall that called itself The Great Rose Hotel, past the main road that did a mish-mash linking of the ‘gallis’, past the hustle and bustle of barbers who weaved cheap wigs, chicken eggs sellers and crap dealers that lined the ‘shopping area’, past the teetering and small board that announced itself as ‘AJanta Nagar’, the A clearly painted as an afterthought, and past the Rickshaw stand and the two horribly potholed over-bridges that ran over the open ‘nullah’ and connected ‘Janta Nagar’ to Ajanta Nagar, Rajan thought of all the days that he and his wife squabbled with dissatisfaction over their 1 bedroom apartment in the outskirts in Gandhi Gaon and eventually decided to shift to a rented 2 bedroom apartment in the suburbs in Cantonment.
“A must to maintain our standards in society”, they’d agreed in unison.
So what If the beautiful fish tank was the only thing noticeable about Hanif’s 1 and a ½ room hutment. So what is the sooji-ka-meetha Hanif’s wife had served would have tasted a lot better if Hanif would have been able to afford asli ghee? So what if given the means, Hanif might have made his children reach even greater heights? So what if Hanif’s wife couldn’t speak English, she stood by her husband and he stood by her much more than he and Pooja had ever stood by each other.
So what if Hanif had added an A to his address to make it Ajanta Nagar instead of Janta Nagar and painted an imaginary ‘Aashiyaana Park’ in fine gold lettering on top of the unfinished exterior of his hutment?
Here was this simple man, a skilled labourer by profession who painted people’s houses for a paltry sum in comparison to what their corporate jobs paid them, building his own one room in a part of town he was unashamed of living in and trying his best to nurture the house within his means and calling it his home sweet home.
Rajan waited for Pooja to say something along the entire 15 km drive back to the suburbs. She said nothing until they reached a crossroad.
--> Cantonment <-- Gandhi Gaon, Gandhi Annexe
The directions on the green and white signboard said.
Even as Rajan involuntarily turned the handle to his left, he heard his wife come close to him and whisper gently,
“Left, sweetheart. Lets go home.”
As they drove past the scenic range of hills that led up to Gandhi Gaon, Rajan secretly thanked the man he’d met two days ago, his painter who amused himself and others with the broken English learnt from his clients, a simple man with limited means who lovingly nurtured his house and family, for having helped and played a role in building his own dream home..
Four years later
A beautifully done beige and white building stood at Plot no. 16, Gandhi Gaon. A little kid of about 1 year was learning to take his first steps in the minutely nurtured greenery in the garden. A vibrant couple shared a heartfelt smile as they saw their son walk for the first time, taking care to videotape each second of the wondrous feat.
As the camera panned and zoomed over the main entrance of the bungalow, a couple of words in beautifully calligraphic gold lettering captured the emotion in the couple’s heart to perfection.
“AASHIYAANA PARK.”, it said.

